Tuesday, October 30, 2012

RA #2


Julie Carrow

                                                                                     Rhetorical Analysis

                Joan Morgan’s approach in the article “From Fly-Girls to Bitches and Hos,” attempts to solve the problem of sexism in the black community by bringing the “brothers and sistas” together, allowing them to openly discuss the difficult topics that are plaguing their community. The topics center on sexism in hip-hop and the desolation hiding behind the masculinity and boldness of the verbiage in most hip-hop songs. Morgan believes that “black on black love” is at risk of disappearing and the sexism in rap music, which many black males identify with, is actually an expression of despair at their position in their community. To remedy this, Morgan stresses that “brothers and sistas” “give[]our community the potential for remedies based on honest, clear diagnoses” (Morgan 607). This article was written primarily to a African American audience, observed through the use of jargon that the article is written in. The article is aimed toward someone who knows who “Notorious B.I.G., Sir Mix A-Lot, and Jeru the Damaja” are, otherwise the evidence the author provides might not have the desired impact. In my opinion, Morgan does a respectable job of luring in her audience with proper logos they can relate to, such as, “while it’s human to occasionally fall deep into love thang with people or situations that simply aren’t good for you, feminism alerted me long ago to the dangers of romancing a misogynist (and ridiculously fine, brilliant ones with gangsta leans are no exception)” (Morgan 602). Furthermore, Morgan appeals to the emotions of the audience as she discusses the fatal animal attack and burn victim as examples of how the black community is having a hard time loving each other. I found these examples appalling, though well suited for her case. I also found it thought-provoking that Morgan mentions the women who participate in degrading hip-hop videos. Typically when I think of hip-hop videos I scowl because of the portrayal of women it promotes. However, Morgan has a noteworthy point: “sistas have to confront the ways we’re complicit in our own oppression. Sad to say it, but many of the ways in which men exploit our images and sexuality in hip-hop is done with our permission and cooperation” (Morgan 605). I do not often think about the reality that those women volunteered for the roles of being depicted as objects. Overall I would have to agree with Morgan’s article: a decent remedy for the situation of sexism in hip-hop is to get the different genders together to communicate and discuss what it is that is causing the apparent grief illustrated in the lyrics. If the parties can listen to the other and come to an understanding of each other, the bonds between “brother and sista” will grow stronger, portrayals of sexism will diminish, and the black community as a whole will be well on its way to a healthy and connected union.

 

 

Morgan, Joan. “From Fly-Girls to Bitches and Hos.” Rereading American:Cultural Contexts for Critical Thinking       
                  and Writing 8 (2010): 601-07. Print.

 

 

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